понедельник, 1 апреля 2013 г.

Writing stories

Task: Write a fantasy story about a musical ferret who loves to play a yoyo.

It was last summer.The sun was shining and we were going to the garden that would have breakfast on the fresh air. Walking up the stairs, I heard a strange voice:
"Please turn on the radio"
 I wasn`t exactly accustomed to hearing someone speak to me early morning."May be my little brother want to listen to music.Whatever.He can turn the radio himself " I thought.
 "Hey!Turn it on!I want to dance"
After these words, I began to look into the corner of unlighted room. My eyes opened wide and I was very confused, because it was my ferret.He was sitting and waiting for my reaction. "Okey.Just a moment" I answered.
 Now we were both surprised.I never thought that one day I can understand it. When we both came to, I turned on the radio and hurried from the room. I could not believe what had happened, but my ferret dance on two legs in a cage. Without thinking, he pulled off  from the table yoyo and danced with him as a gymnast. Finally I went into the garden and decided not to think about what had happened. Later, my mother said it was from yesterday's heat stroke. Although I still can not find my yoyo.
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  1. Unknown2 апреля 2013 г. в 05:10

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  2. Игорь2 апреля 2013 г. в 05:11

    Brilliant story! Logically justified ending.

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  3. Tanja2 апреля 2013 г. в 05:12

    In my opinion the task realized good. All sentences wrote logical.
    The story is amazing but I hope, that in real life this is not repeat.

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  4. Nadja2 апреля 2013 г. в 05:13

    Topic is very difficult. Story is very good and I love it.

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  5. Edgar2 апреля 2013 г. в 05:15

    I liked this story,it isn`t bad but were some grammar mistakes. In my opinion it`s good story.

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  6. Roma Gorbenkov2 апреля 2013 г. в 05:15

    In my opinion this story was cheerful, I liked that.

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  7. Unknown2 апреля 2013 г. в 05:19

    I like it. Very intresting!

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  8. Irina2 апреля 2013 г. в 05:20

    It was difficult to understand this text. This was induced by the structure. I think paragraphing must be more clear. But meaning was good.

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  9. Unknown2 апреля 2013 г. в 05:20

    Story is very interesting and unusual. I think little children would certainly love it because story remids some kind of fairytail.

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  10. Reelika2 апреля 2013 г. в 05:23

    It is very unusual story. But I didn't fully understand what had happend at the end of the story.

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  11. Valeria2 апреля 2013 г. в 05:26

    This story was excellent and interesting,thank you

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  12. Unknown2 апреля 2013 г. в 05:27

    Very interesting and funny story.Like a fairy tale that can be told in a kindergarden.

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